Hi Aarron
Only real advice I can give to you is to get more variation in your portfolio. You are a very beautiful young woman with lots of potential, just need moving in the right direction and you could go far. I would suggest that you get more images of different styles and themes in your portfolio (head shots, portraits, glamour, fashion, etc) and if you need any help just give me a shout as I'm only in Edinburgh.
The images you have are great and your bubbly nature shines through them
Marc